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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Snow White - from an interesting perspective: PART 3

    Wow, this is really really good! Great hooks-- I couldn't stop reading until I had completely finished :) Continue on! One thing though-- some of the lines can be a ...

    Feb 21, 2007
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Salem Underground

    Your writing techniques are completely gripping. Your opening paragraphs were everything opening paragraphs should ever be: shocking, mysterious and alluring. And of course, grammatically correct :)

    Feb 19, 2007


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes